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雅思写作--如何快速攻克犯罪题题目
发布来源: 新通山西 发布时间:2021-06-01


今天新仔为大家带来了雅思写作板块--犯罪类题目社会上的犯罪率不断攀升令人忧虑,雅思写作的犯罪类考题难度不低。特别是在词汇量要求方面,往往也很“暴力”。雅思任务二经常会涉及到犯罪类题目,这类型的题目其实只要可以掌握它的答题要领,就可以快速攻克。下面我们首先从词汇搭配的角度,看一下雅思犯罪类写作对lexical resources 的要求。 


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震慑作用   a deterrent effect   

逃避惩罚   escape punishment

再三考虑   think twice

阻止犯罪   prevent crime

遏制犯罪   curb crime  (curb temper/ spread of virus)

打击犯罪   combat crime

犯罪          commit a crime  (表示某一项罪行是可数名词)

违反法律   break laws

触犯翻绿   violate laws

抓捕罪犯   catch criminals

在逃罪犯   an escaping criminals

武装警察   armed police

携带武器   carry weapons  

支付罚款   pay a fine

服刑       serve a prison term

作为志愿者 work as a volunteer

减少贫穷   reduce poverty

职业培训   vocational/ job training

视频监控   surveillance cameras

违法       commit crimes  

快速赚钱   make fast money   

触犯法律   break the law

违反法律   violate laws  

遵守法律   obey laws

遵守法律   comply with laws  

面对惩罚   face any punishment  

监禁       a prison sentence  

严重的后果 severe consequences    

青少年犯罪 youth crime  

青少年犯罪 juvenile delinquency  

年轻的罪犯 young offenders

轻微的犯罪 petty crimes   

严重的犯罪 serious crimes  

种族矛盾   racial tensions  

重点

犯罪举例:抢劫robbery ; 绑架hijack; 强奸rape;商店偷窃shoplift (shoplifter);走私smuggle;贩毒drug-traffickingtraffic交易)放火罪arson;杀人罪Offenses of Homicide\murder;故意伤害intentional injury\assault

成人:

1:贫富差距(心理原因)economic inequality

2:失业(导致生活压力和贫穷)unemployment/poverty

3:受教育程度低(工作得到的收入少所以想赚easy moneylack of education 

4:法律监管和惩罚不严格导致犯罪成本低legal supervision and management

青少年:

1:模仿影视作品(暴力/霸陵)imitate violence 

2:影响(交到坏朋友小孩不明辨是非道德边界不明显所以会被坏朋友影响)impact distinguish right from wrong

3:性格(好奇心寻求刺激叛逆虚荣心)character

4:缺乏家庭教育或家庭教育不得当以及缺乏关爱 parenting

5:学校管理不严格学生不自律self-discipline

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讨论犯罪原因的题目:

In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?

Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is committed by people who are bad by nature.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【雅思写作犯罪类范文】

 

题目一  

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

完整范文

It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law.

的确,刑满释放人员可以成为正常的、有贡献的社会成员。我完全同意这样的观点,允许这些人向青少年讲述他们的经历是阻止他们违法的最好方法。

 

In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people,imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.

在我看来,青少年更可能接受来现身说法的人的建议。改过自新的罪犯可以告诉年轻人他们是如何卷入犯罪的,犯罪生活方式的危险,以及监狱生活的真实情况。它们还可以消除青少年对罪犯过着光鲜生活的任何想法。虽然青少年往往对老年人的指导漠不关心,但想象一下,他们中的大多数人会非常渴望听到一个有前科的人的故事。这些故事的生动和令人震惊的性质可能会产生强大的影响。

 

The alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be much less effective. One option would be for police officers to visit schools and talk to young people. This could be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to lawbreakers when they are caught, but young people are often reluctant to take advice from figures of authority. A second option would be for school teachers to speak to their students about crime, but I doubt that students would see teachers as credible sources of information about this topic. Finally, educational films might be informative, but there would be no opportunity for young people to interact and ask questions.

用改过自新的罪犯来教育青少年犯罪的替代方法就没有那么有效了。一个选择是让警察去学校和年轻人交谈。这在告知青少年违法者被抓后会发生什么方面可能很有用,但年轻人往往不愿接受权威人士的建议。第二种选择是让学校老师向学生讲述犯罪,但我怀疑学生是否会把老师视为这个话题的可靠信息来源。最后,教育性电影可能会提供信息,但不会有机会让年轻人互动和问问题。

 

In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who have turned their lives around after serving a prison sentence could help to deter teenagers from committing crimes.

总之,我完全支持这样的观点,那些在服刑后改变了生活的人可以帮助阻止青少年犯罪。

 

——引自雅思考官Simon Corcoran 的网站  

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