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【Part2话题】雅思口语8分素材:帮助朋友
发布来源: 南京申友留学语培中心 发布时间:2021-07-21



# Part 2 帮助朋友 #

                           


       题目


Describe a time when you helped a friend

You should say:

When it was

How you helped him/her

Why you helped him/her

And how you felt about it


       话题分析


这是一道个人经历类的考题,细节部分的内容是这道题的点睛之笔,也能让考官真实的感受到你所叙述事情的真实性。


很多烤鸭的难点在于不知道该怎么定义帮助朋友这件事,但其实我们可以一个角度,也可以是从多个角度上来叙述,学习、生活、工作......只要是你想到的,都可以说出来,但也要注重逻辑。


1)When it was

什么时候的事情?主要是要交代故事背景,你和“被帮助的朋友”的关系,他遇到了什么困难,你是主动帮忙,还是他向你主动求助的。


2)How you helped him/her

如何帮助他?是这道题的重要的一项,这件事情的真实性要靠这件事情来表现。虽然说,雅思考试并没有要求事件的真实性,但考官的主观感受才是你得分的关键。


3)Why you helped him/her

为什么帮助他?有很多理由,你们感情很好,你有能力帮助他,他曾经帮助过你,属于互惠互利的类型。


4)And how you felt about it

你感觉如何?成就感、开心、觉得自己被需要......在帮助他的过程中,你获得了不一样的体验和人生经历,可能是不好的,也可能是好的。


       参考答案


I would like to talk about a time when I helped my best friend Emma quit bad life habits and adopt a healthier lifestyle.


You see, back in college, she used to stay up late very often to play computer games, and certainly she didn’t think much about what it would do to her body. I was a bit concerned. I did some research online, only to find there are many potential risks if you keep being sleep-deprived. For example, you could easily become  bad-tempered, and of course, there’ll be dark circles around eyes, and you’ll gain a weary looking.So I put together my findings, and shared them with Emma. She was also surprised to know just how hazardous an unhealthy lifestyle could be. Then I shared more advice, such as the way to maintain a balanced diet, including increasing the intake of vitamin and fiber by eating more than two different kinds of veggies and fruits every day. I was glad that she listened. She read those materials carefully, reduced her time spent on games, planned and followed a much healthier schedule. She got less addicted to games and I could tell she was getting more energy during the daytime.


I felt so happy for her change. I have to admit: it also gave me a sense of achievement, seeing I had helped another person become better and healthier.


       词汇积累


lend a helping hand 伸出援手

achievement 成就感

have to admit 不得不承认

bad-tempered 易怒的


# Part 3 帮助朋友 #

                           


1) How do people usually help each other?

In many ways I’d say. For example, when we meet children in poverty-stricken mountainous areas, we can make donations within our capabilities; when we our friends have a bad mood, we can take them out to relax, and help them feel better. To put it simply, in order to be helpful, try to figure out the problem of others and provide constructive solutions.


2)How is online help different from real-life help?

Online help can only solve some remote problems, such as helping classmates or friends to solve academic problems, or guiding teaching through voice and video, but not demonstrating in person. Real-life help can be more efficient sometimes,because you can personally know the problems and observe more details, such as helping others repair computers, install machines, and so on. In general, online help and real-life help have their own advantages and disadvantages, which can only be reflected in a specific situation.


3)Should schools be responsible for teaching students how to cooperate?

I do believe that the school plays an essential role in children's growth, and it should be responsible for the education of morality and other important abilities. For students, the two places where they spend the longest time are family and school. The school should work with parents to cultivate children's good qualities, including learning to cooperate.

Cooperation can improve efficiency, allow students to exchange ideas and gain more perspectives.


4)What are the differences between help from friends and help from family?

It's hard to tell, I think. The quesiton needs to be analyzed according to specific situations. When I encounter difficulties, like academic problems, I would ask the help from my friends, since they are close and can quickly help me solve my problems. And the communication is easy. However, in some cases, it is better to accept the help from family, for example, when I need money to pay for the tuition, I have to turn to my parents for help, coz their love is unconditional, and there’s no need to worry about being embarrassed to ask.

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