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剑桥雅思11,12雅思季原创范文
发布来源: 梦工场雅思托福留学工作室 发布时间:2017-08-01

 


各位小主,剑11,12上市都有一段时间了。每年上市之前都会万众瞩目,可是剑11,12有个难言之痛。范文都是学生的低分文章,有的5分。这样的文章还有啥看头。


今天特地分析我的原创范文,这些范文也收录进今年10月即将出版的《雅思写作梦工场》,目前来自全国各地的近10位编委会老师正在夜以继日的给文章做注解,找出书中近160篇大小作文的亮点词汇和句型。增加可读性,本人在此表示衷心感谢!!!


11 Test 2 饼图-雅思季原创范文


The charts below show the proportion of British students in a university in England who were able to speak other languages other than English in 2000 and 2010.

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where  relevant.


 

   

Sample answer

 

The charts provide a clear overview of the percentage of students in a university in England who were able to speak other languages other than Englishin 2000 and 2010.

 

According to the chart, it is clear that Spanish remained to be the most popular foreign language for the students, which accounts for 30% of the total students in 2000. 15% of the students could speak French in college, German was nextwith 10%. One in ten students could in fact, speak two other languages.Besides, 15% of the students claimed they had taken language courses from unspecified countries. However, one in five students decided not to learn anyforeign language.

 

Turning to the year 2010, a record high of 35% of the students spoke Spanish. There was also an additional 5% of increase in the number of studentswho could handle two more languages. By comparison, the statistic for those whospoke only English dropped by half, followed by 5% reduction for French language speakers (now only 10%) where German speakers retained a similar ratio.

 

To sum up, the charts indicate that UK students showed greater interestfor language learning particularly in Spanish.

 


11 Test 4 雅思季原创范文


The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with    their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 


Total number of visitors to Ashdown Museum

 

During the year before refurbishment

74000

During the year after refurbishment

92000

 



The table provides detailed information about the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after its refurbishment while the pie charts list thesurvey result of visitors’ level of satisfaction for both periods.

 

According to the table, the renovation proved to have produced a very positive result. In fact, the figure grew considerably from 74,000 to 92,000,approximately a 25% net increase in total.

 

Turning to the results of the survey, it is worth noting that half the visitors felt negatively about Ashdown museum. Among these, 40% of guests were dissatisfied, an additional 10% were very unhappy about their visits. In contrast, the corresponding statistics for satisfied and very satisfied visitor sstood at 15% and 30% respectively. The remaining 5% of visitors did not respond to the survey.

 

       However, the facelift of Ashdown Museum seems to have uplifted visitors’ experience dramatically. This time, two thirds of the visitors said they were either very satisfied (35%) or satisfied (40%) with their visits. Meanwhile, those who felt dissatisfied with the museum accounted for only 15%, a mere 5% of people gave the lowest rating. Again, no response was given by other 5% of people.

 

       To sum up, the museum refurbishment has been very successful in terms of raising the total visitors’ count as well as their rating level.

 

剑12 Test 5-雅思季原创范文


The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 





Sample answer

 

The chart compares the proportion of male and female Australians in six age groups, who participated in regular physical activities in 2010.

 

According to the chart, it is clear that women spend more time exercising than men in general, in the age groups ranging from 35-44 45-5455-64. To be specific, approximately 53% of ladies are reported to engage in frequent exercise, by contrast, the corresponding figures for men stood at 39.9%, 43.1% and 45.1% respectively. Besides, there was also a 6.6% gap between them in the 25-34 age group.

 

The smallest gap between the genders can be seen in the eldest age group, while 46.7% men and a very close 47.1% of women claimed they didphysical exercise often. The only age group where men performed better is in the youngest age group of 15 to 24, the number was an impressive 52.8% for theformer versus 47.7% for the latter.

 

To sum up, nearly half of the Australians engage themselves in regular physical and women seem to show greater interest.

 

12 Test 7-雅思季原创范文

The diagram below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in food  restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  

                         

 

Sample answer

 

The chart provides a clear comparison between the percentages of people who eat in fast food outlets based on the frequency of the visits in three separate years of 2003, 2006, 2013.

 

According to the chart, it is clear that the highest percentage can be found for people who patronized once or twice a month in 2003 (about 33%). This figure was closely matched by those who would opt for fast food roughly once a week in 2006.

 

Those who eat fast food nearly every day take up only 4%. In addition, the data show that this group of people shrank to almost 2.5% during the decade. By contrast, there was a similar statistic for the other extreme group, who claims they never buy any fast food.

 

Among the remaining targeted groups of consumers, the trend varied in each group. Those who eat only a few times a week remained below 15% during the period, while those having fast food several times a week stood well between16%-20%.

 

To sum up, the overall pattern shows a slumping popularity of the fast food in the USA in most age groups


晒一个高分学生的评语,口语7分,不得了!





编委会老师都是全国各地一线雅思写作高手,大都是海归或在国外直接参与的(悉尼和爱尔兰),衷心感谢老师们的辛勤付出。写作梦工场is coming! please get ready for it.




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